my last day at work -
in the forecast
freezing rain

—Rich Magahiz
        

About the author: Rich Magahiz
Dumont, NJ
Email: rmagahiz at yahoo.com
Webpage: click here

Rich notes that haiku "come close to constituting my native tongue."

Responses to the haiku for 3 December 2004 by Rich Magahiz

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-03 05:34:07
     

    reading my palm-
    a broken
    heart line

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-12-03 09:10:37
     

    last day at work
    every minute
    ticks

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-03 19:42:27
     

    extinguishing the sun -
    overall, it's been one long fulfilling day

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