rainy day champignons sweat on the hot stove —Tanya Dikova
About the author: Tanya Dikova: bubalazy at hotmail dot com
This puts us there.
rainy day champignons sweat on the hot stove Excellent! Imagery, sounds, scents, the tactile - this one's got it all, Tanya. Great jux, too. A first rate poem!
Now I crave some fried mushrooms.
A very tasty haiku. I love haiku that can give both sound and smell! ;-)
snow fungus bisque upsets stomach-- yellow staining mushroom
Thanks to all of you-the specialists, who appreciated and shared the taste of my "gourmet" haiku :)
Yummy one.
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This puts us there.
rainy day
champignons sweat
on the hot stove
Excellent!
Imagery, sounds, scents, the tactile - this one's got it all, Tanya. Great jux, too. A first rate poem!
Now I crave some fried mushrooms.
A very tasty haiku. I love haiku that can give both sound and smell! ;-)
snow fungus bisque
upsets stomach--
yellow staining mushroom
Thanks to all of you-the specialists, who appreciated and shared the taste of my "gourmet" haiku :)
Yummy one.