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Responses to the haiku for 18 December 2007 by Eric Houck Jr.

1.  
   mike farley
   2007-12-18 07:15:57
    

   the old dog's sigh
   a log settles deeper
   into the embers
   
   —Eric Houck Jr.
   
   
   red embers--
   she persuades me
   to stay in bed
   
   mike

2.  
   josh wikoff
   2007-12-18 08:27:06
    

   A very warm poem on this cold morning - thanks, Eric.

3.  
   aurora
   2007-12-18 12:24:19
    

   Good to see your work here, Eric.

4.  
   ynes (ysanz at optusnet dot com dot au)
   2007-12-18 13:26:03
    

   thanks for that sigh Eric - I've always been inclined to trust old dogs' commentary on our lives . . .
   
   dusk in the garden
   old dog wags a greeting to
   the compost-heap rat

5.  
   Georgia
   2007-12-18 13:40:06
    

   Lovely -- format really good, feeling wonderful. Thanks for this treat!

6.  
   Bill Kenney
   2007-12-18 19:07:24
    

   This is so vivid and so true that it immediately feels like my own experience.

7.  
   laryalee
   2007-12-19 10:51:16
    

   What a powerful atmosphere, Eric --
   I can see it, hear it, smell it!
   ;)
   Lary

8.  
   b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2007-12-20 15:46:24
    

   playful pup
   long after the last ember turns ashy--
   the old hound farts

9.  
   Jenny C.
   2007-12-22 10:25:32
    

   Great image, Eric.

10.  
    john mcdonald
    2008-01-01 01:40:16
     

    wonderful one eric.

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