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with her two hands
the artist frames
blue summer sky
—KJMUNRO
An unusual arrangement of line order, and lack of an article, but it captures the immediacy of the artist taking their first steps in capturing the day.
Perhaps all of us ought to do that each morning, even if we are not artists, then again, why shouldn't we be artists of our own day.
Like Annette, I have done this myself many times in order to create the perfect composition – it's difficult to capture something as vast as the sky! Lovely,
October 14th, 2014 at 8:46 am
Very, very neat: concise and emotive. Well done!
October 14th, 2014 at 8:47 am
Wow! It is striking that something as endless can be framed.
October 14th, 2014 at 9:13 am
I love painting and writing poetry and found this very inspirational.
October 14th, 2014 at 9:23 am
Such a beautiful, vivid image and a wonderful tribute to women artists.
October 14th, 2014 at 10:25 am
from up there
can you see the coolness
it's coming
The vividness of the poem transports you there. Very nice. Ron G
October 14th, 2014 at 12:21 pm
As an artist, I've done this many times myself. Wonderful sense of expansiveness.
October 14th, 2014 at 12:59 pm
Lovely, vivid imagery! Very enjoyable! :)
October 15th, 2014 at 5:43 am
.
with her two hands
the artist frames
blue summer sky
—KJMUNRO
An unusual arrangement of line order, and lack of an article, but it captures the immediacy of the artist taking their first steps in capturing the day.
Perhaps all of us ought to do that each morning, even if we are not artists, then again, why shouldn't we be artists of our own day.
Wonderful poem!
warm regards,
Alan
October 15th, 2014 at 4:52 pm
a lovely indraf bresth with this one. thank you.
October 15th, 2014 at 4:54 pm
a lovely indrawn breath with this one. thank you.
(sorry for the typos)
October 15th, 2014 at 9:13 pm
Thank you all for your comments & kind words… en route to Seabeck… Kathy
October 16th, 2014 at 9:23 am
A beautiful poem. Thank you.
This is an old poem from my blogs.
one month ends
another begins
evergreen branches
frame the night sky
October 21st, 2014 at 12:40 am
Like Annette, I have done this myself many times in order to create the perfect composition – it's difficult to capture something as vast as the sky! Lovely,
marion