with her two hands
the artist frames
blue summer sky
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kjmunro
kjmunro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, Canada. She has recently joined the Executive of Haiku Canada, &, as a volunteer for The Whitehorse Poetry Society (now called Yukon Writers' Collective Ink), she helped organize the biennial Whitehorse Poetry Festival. She was awarded Honorable Mention in the 2014 Robert Spiess Memorial Haiku Award Competition, & her leaflet, summer evening, is available through Leaf Press. (www.leafpress.ca)
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Very, very neat: concise and emotive. Well done!
Wow! It is striking that something as endless can be framed.
I love painting and writing poetry and found this very inspirational.
Such a beautiful, vivid image and a wonderful tribute to women artists.
from up there
can you see the coolness
it's coming
The vividness of the poem transports you there. Very nice. Ron G
As an artist, I've done this many times myself. Wonderful sense of expansiveness.
Lovely, vivid imagery! Very enjoyable! :)
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with her two hands
the artist frames
blue summer sky
—KJMUNRO
An unusual arrangement of line order, and lack of an article, but it captures the immediacy of the artist taking their first steps in capturing the day.
Perhaps all of us ought to do that each morning, even if we are not artists, then again, why shouldn't we be artists of our own day.
Wonderful poem!
warm regards,
Alan
a lovely indraf bresth with this one. thank you.
a lovely indrawn breath with this one. thank you.
(sorry for the typos)
Thank you all for your comments & kind words… en route to Seabeck… Kathy
A beautiful poem. Thank you.
This is an old poem from my blogs.
one month ends
another begins
evergreen branches
frame the night sky
Like Annette, I have done this myself many times in order to create the perfect composition – it's difficult to capture something as vast as the sky! Lovely,
marion