ripples on the pond ~ small talk
—Dave Read
Issue 14.1 | 14 May 2014
Very nice. Says so much so succinctly.
What would we do without all those ripples!
…and the depths underneath. I like this haiku very much.
I like the suggestion of an undercurrent!
marion
Thank you everyone. Truly appreciate your kind comments.
ripples write poetry in the pond the poet reclines
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May 14th, 2014 at 10:32 am
Very nice. Says so much so succinctly.
May 14th, 2014 at 1:03 pm
What would we do without all those ripples!
May 14th, 2014 at 10:00 pm
…and the depths underneath. I like this haiku very much.
May 17th, 2014 at 5:49 am
I like the suggestion of an undercurrent!
marion
May 19th, 2014 at 7:04 am
Thank you everyone. Truly appreciate your kind comments.
May 20th, 2014 at 5:52 am
ripples write
poetry in the pond
the poet reclines