There was a time I saw a lot of abandoned kites in trees, much rarer now.
Glorious opening line, wonderful alliteration acting and becoming as subliminal onomatopoeia, and all down to a single lost kite, or maybe not [enter Vincent Price's voice].
:-)
October 31st, 2016 at 8:45 am
Yes! Perfect!
October 31st, 2016 at 10:00 am
Very happy to see this Holloween haiku by Jane. It is perfect.
October 31st, 2016 at 10:01 am
There was a time I saw a lot of abandoned kites in trees, much rarer now.
Glorious opening line, wonderful alliteration acting and becoming as subliminal onomatopoeia, and all down to a single lost kite, or maybe not [enter Vincent Price's voice].
:-)
warm regards,
Alan
October 31st, 2016 at 12:15 pm
Beautiful memory is a kite !!
Weather of ghosts,
Or of souls ,
Night keeps record.
Kite is in safe hands…
November 1st, 2016 at 1:29 pm
treasured ghost
lingers within the moonbeams
wisperku
November 1st, 2016 at 5:37 pm
Resonates with Jane's voice. Lovely!
marion