he takes with him the important ones memory care
—Victor Ortiz
Issue 22.1 | 21 June 2022
Wow! So many possibilities… is he consciously trying to remember some things? are they disappearing out of reach? is he locking them away and not sharing them? 'prioritizing his life? thank you for sharing…
Very moving poem. So many ways to interpret it.
. . . and he'll never tell. but i remember his thoughts i remember his love. 'tis a secret– a memory we share.
thanks for the memories, Victor you done good.
Quite a potent poem, Victor. Yes, I'll be thinking about this one for a long time. Such an elegant philosophical statement in 9 words
thank you all for taking the time to respond to this poem. vale!
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June 21st, 2022 at 4:28 pm
Wow! So many possibilities… is he consciously trying to remember some things? are they disappearing out of reach? is he locking them away and not sharing them? 'prioritizing his life? thank you for sharing…
June 21st, 2022 at 4:32 pm
Very moving poem. So many ways to interpret it.
June 21st, 2022 at 6:18 pm
. . . and he'll never tell.
but i remember his thoughts
i remember his love.
'tis a secret–
a memory
we share.
thanks for the memories, Victor
you done good.
June 21st, 2022 at 7:54 pm
Quite a potent poem, Victor. Yes, I'll be thinking about this one for a long time. Such an elegant philosophical statement in 9 words
June 22nd, 2022 at 2:00 pm
thank you all for taking the time to respond to this poem. vale!