Thanks, Vidya.
It was lovely to read your feedback. Yes, we have plenty of rivers that have left us with our memories.
This is a memory ku of some 25 years back.
I'm talking about the river Cauvery seen (not seen) in Bhavani village.
I don't know the status now.
October 13th, 2022 at 7:11 pm
fallen leaves sing
river notes of this wind-song
nature's tempo
__Grand Kala… your poetic-painting of nature's seasonal dances_! _m
October 13th, 2022 at 9:48 pm
Thanks a ton, Magyar.
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October 13th, 2022 at 8:35 pm
Lovely haiku mourning the death of a river . Congratulations Kala
October 13th, 2022 at 9:51 pm
Thanks, Vidya.
It was lovely to read your feedback. Yes, we have plenty of rivers that have left us with our memories.
This is a memory ku of some 25 years back.
I'm talking about the river Cauvery seen (not seen) in Bhavani village.
I don't know the status now.
October 13th, 2022 at 9:01 pm
Your Mastery of classical Indian music shows in this wonderful haiku! As always Kala!
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within the stillness rat’s rilpples
October 13th, 2022 at 9:29 pm
Please excuse my misspelling of ripples. Cannot operate an android phone! Vidya S Venkatramani has it right.
October 13th, 2022 at 9:52 pm
Oh! Wow!
Martin, thank you.
I love your one-line.
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October 13th, 2022 at 9:11 pm
This beauty touches me! Fantastic haiku Kala ❤
October 13th, 2022 at 9:53 pm
Thanks a million, Elisa.
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