winter dusk when dad would phone
—Roberta Beary
Issue 09.1 | 5 February 2010
Father’s Day…an 11th hour teddy bear
(Prune Juice, Autumn 09)
Roberta, it’s a pleasure to experience Your haiku.
It’s deep and natural. Rare.
Beautiful, and all in just six words.
Alan With Words
Special time, special moment…
Memories are always warm. Missing is a reality.
Poignant haiku, a good first sentence also.
wareright roberta
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February 5th, 2010 at 1:58 pm
Father’s Day…an 11th hour teddy bear
(Prune Juice, Autumn 09)
February 5th, 2010 at 2:06 pm
Roberta, it’s a pleasure to experience Your haiku.
It’s deep and natural. Rare.
February 5th, 2010 at 3:02 pm
Beautiful, and all in just six words.
Alan
With Words
February 5th, 2010 at 6:27 pm
Special time, special moment…
February 6th, 2010 at 2:14 pm
Memories are always warm.
Missing is a reality.
February 6th, 2010 at 2:34 pm
Poignant haiku, a good first sentence also.
July 27th, 2010 at 3:40 pm
wareright roberta