orion
my mind back at the source
of words


7 Responses

  1. Brandon Bordelon Says:

    camping accident…
    Orion offers his belt
    as a tourniquet

  2. Ross Says:

    I dig the imaginative and whimsical quality of this haiku, BB. Nice one.

  3. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Great sense of the depth of thought.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Terrific couple of lines to back up the first line. Highly memorable.

    Alan

  5. Ross Says:

    Wow. Profound and cosmic, Dietmar. Very powerful.

  6. Mary F.Ahearn Says:

    The source of words, poetry, and the sense of space – really enjoyed this.

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wow, indeed! I now know I need to have my eyes tested as I read this as 'onion' until I noticed the comments about space and the cosmos – well, it made sense to me, in terms of peeling back layers.

    But it is even better as 'orion', Dietmar! :)

    marion

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