a blustering day
lying in the wet street
a bag lady


—Genevieve Penn
        

A modern response to an old haiku by Issa.

About the author: GENEVIEVE PENN, GPenn54 at msn.com.

Responses to the haiku for 15 November 2001 by Genevieve Penn

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2003-12-05 09:10:31
     

    wind driven
    day ...
    her flowing hair greets me

  2.  
    Jim Gogolak (jimmygogo at msn dot com)
    2004-05-21 18:23:18
     

    cold, pale flesh

    empty, expressionless stare

    goodbye, my brother

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-05-23 14:09:51
     

    brilliant setting sun
    wall reflects --
    mourning green leaves

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