back from war
the soldier cleans
his room




(originally published in DailyHaiku, 6/2/09)


4 Responses

  1. @andreochka Says:

    Very nice – really enjoyed

  2. Golem100 Says:

    Poignant imagery.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Subtle suggestion that the soldier is a man in the theatre of war, and still a boy when he comes home safe.


  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Too young to go to war!

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