not a nibble
yet moonlight caught
in autumn's pond

—Darrell Lindsey

This haiku was a prize winner in the 2006 Genkissu! Spirits Up! World Wide
Hekinan Haiku Contest

About the author: Darrell Lindsey: writerd at hotmail dot com

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Responses to the haiku for 9 November 2006 by Darrell Lindsey

  1.  
    Doug Ryan
    2006-11-09 09:28:55
     

    _Ah... no fish, but a visit to nature's quiet, is never a loss_!
    _Great image Darrell!

    moon questions
    quiver on the pond
    owls answer _M

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-11-09 09:33:53
     

    I like this, with its gentle pun.

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-11-09 09:38:38
     

    Calls to mind the work of Japanese masters.

  4.  
    Georgia
    2006-11-09 13:05:18
     

    Quite a marvel!

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-16 13:27:10
     

    bite after bite--
    damn mosquito
    should have been male

  6.  
    Terra Martin
    2006-12-31 13:33:11
     

    Loved it! Seduction of senses.

  7.  
    cadie
    2007-07-17 14:31:51
     

    Congratulations on this Beautiful Haiku being a winner in a contest. How did i ever miss this entry? I haven't been on this sight in a very long time. Cadie

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