so clear
without leaves
frost moon

—Ann K. Schwader

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

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Responses to the haiku for 13 November 2006 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-11-13 09:33:04
     

    Beautiful, Ann.

    I never saw it
    until winter stripped the trees:
    the curve of the hill

  2.  
    Magyar
    2006-11-13 10:47:38
     

    _Great thought, Ann... awareness of nature's way... to help us see!
    _And in seeing leafless limbs in a contrary direction?

    moon sent
    a shadows broom
    barnside whisked
    _M

  3.  
    devils miss
    2006-11-13 15:04:37
     

    the light in the night
    that gos by the moon shines bright
    its my big night light

  4.  
    kala ramesh
    2006-11-13 19:59:14
     

    So simple and clear.
    enjoyed visualising it!
    - kala

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webv dot net)
    2006-11-16 13:56:49
     

    transparent, this moon
    in the light
    transparent my shadow

    -

    cooler and cooler
    autumnal equinox

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