Veteran's Day--
my chanting produces
a sparrow

—Michael Paone

About the author: At 22, Michael is a young haijin who currently resides just outside of Boston, MA. A self-proclaimed urbanist, he dances quitely on the line between nature and structure. The resulting haiku keeps him somewhat sane.

Contact: mpaone12 at comcast dot net

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Responses to the haiku for 12 November 2007 by Michael Paone

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-11-11 06:09:44
     

    Very original and fresh. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.

  2.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-11-11 08:15:04
     

    war mausoleum--
    a bird's chirp
    breaks the silence

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-11-13 04:51:09
     

    Michael, I just wanted to say again how much I enjoyed your haiku.

    Also I really enjoyed Andrea's haiku response, a good strong haiku too.

  4.  
    elizabeth
    2007-11-13 13:13:18
     

    excellent. of course

  5.  
    martin
    2007-11-14 05:42:44
     

    I enjoyed this very much!

    Thanks,

    martin

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-14 06:47:50
     

    veteran's day silence
    loud sharp "crack"
    splits the dawn

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