November rain
buzzards drip from the water tower



—Martin Gottlieb Cohen

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

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Responses to the haiku for 14 November 2007 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    electraglide7
    2007-11-14 13:15:57
     

    no roof
    on the moorland
    cottage



    (lot of scale up there)

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-11-17 13:09:19
     

    I enjoyed the buzzards dripping from the water tower very much.

  3.  
    Marijo
    2007-11-17 20:38:02
     

    mom buzzard flies away
    as young ones watch
    from water tower.

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-18 18:18:59
     

    november tears--
    seems to bring
    this november rain

  5.  
    laryalee
    2007-11-22 22:20:12
     

    Hi Martin,
    this is such a unique view...
    I love it!
    ;)
    Lary

  6.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-11-26 16:25:43
     

    A nightmare image, all the more disturbing because it's from the waking world.

  7.  
    martin
    2007-11-26 17:36:37
     

    Thanks everyone for your comments! Bill, there I was walking to work in a heavy downpour when I looked up at the water tower and saw huddled buzzards dripping wet just like me. I thought it was hilarious. I couldn’t stop laughing…

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