after the argument
in the kitchen, gouging out
the potatoes’ eyes
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Laura Orabone
Laura Orabone (lorabone at cox.net) is an artist and author living in Tucson, Arizona with her husband, son, cat, desert tortoise, and three-legged dog.
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6 thoughts on “”
potatoes from a box,
passive agression
seeks new target
i like this angry & funny senryu.it’s interesting that it was more than one potato – which makes me think you argued with more than one person.anyway i enjoyed this very much; thanks.
potatoes from a box,
passive agression
seeks new target
throw that slab of clay
squeeze out air bubbles,
and sculptor’s artistic block
Very nice haiku or senryu to be definite.
mid 40s
finding lenses dont work
anymore for reading
(changing from shortsighted to longsighted)
Laura….This senryu ‘rocks’. I love it and I think it is very good. I laughed sinisterly! More….More….please! b’oki. (bette wappner)
i like this angry & funny senryu.it’s interesting that it was more than one potato – which makes me think you argued with more than one person.anyway i enjoyed this very much; thanks.
entrée of accusations
uneaten meal …
feeding the dog