Laura . . . I agree with you. In this day and age, haiku could address so many personal issues and while I think that is what we want and should do, the other part of me wonders if that is the way to go. It’s a sure bet that whereever it goes, you and I will probably have nothing to do with it.
Good solid “urban haiku”. Sparse and economic.
Good one, nardin.
AA meeting
each surprised to see
the other
AA meeting
the welcoming hand
trembles
AA meeting
a pigeon at the window
keeps coming back
Really excellent! I don’t see enough haiku addressing addiction or other personal issues.
Laura . . . I agree with you. In this day and age, haiku could address so many personal issues and while I think that is what we want and should do, the other part of me wonders if that is the way to go. It’s a sure bet that whereever it goes, you and I will probably have nothing to do with it.
lovers quarrel
for the last hour
only silence is heard
Excellent, Bill! You really captured it!
through partially closed blinds
his loneliness this spring dawn–
the runner