sweeping up everything but my shadow Published by Jason Sanford Brown Jason is the founder and co-editor of Roadrunner Haiku Journal and a member of The Skipping Stones. Contact: roadrunner_haiku at cox dot net View all posts by Jason Sanford Brown
Jason, A salient image of ourselves_! A reminder that we all leave somthing behind… no matter how large our broom. Reply
Beautiful image, yet wistful too–a return to the spirit of wonder as we become childlike, noticing things we cannot explain… Reply
Excellent Jason! A gem truly Here is another but with a different idea altogether. construction finished builders gone the owners nameplate gleams Manu Kant Reply
A striking image, Jason
autumn evening
following my shadow
into the shadows
Jason,
A salient image of ourselves_! A reminder that we all leave somthing behind… no matter how large our broom.
Beautiful image, yet wistful too–a return to the spirit of wonder as we become childlike, noticing things we cannot explain…
Very nice!
the broom & I
cavorting
with our shadows
your words brought
forth a deep
jungian “yes”
to this
simple truth
Another gem, Jason. I admire the simplicity of the image.
i love to return to this ku!
through the showers, then the sun
my shadow–
darker than usual
Thanks to everyone for the kind words!
I’m late getting to this, but what
a fine moment, Jason!
Some things remain untouched…
day lengthens–
yet fearing
the thoughts of tomorrow
Excellent Jason! A gem truly
Here is another but with a different idea altogether.
construction finished
builders gone
the owners nameplate gleams
Manu Kant
clear autumn waters–
this stork searches
within the tree top