afternoon downpour –
a ladybug floats
in a frisbee
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Chris Patalano
Chris is currently a student at Wesleyan University in Connecticut, but he spends his summers at home on Long Island, New York.
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the strength of this haiku is the simple, but interesting contrasts…very nice
the strength of this haiku is the simple, but interesting contrasts…very nice
Nice ku!
Very simple, very memorable, this image will stay with me through the warm autumn, and the rains which will surely come!
Wow… very potent image. Great.
Visual, simple, seasonal, evocative — a truly delightful haiku.
Very nice I really like that.
Love it!
late night downpour-
ceiling outdoes
the leaky faucet
Won my heart. I love ladybugs!
everglades
morning downpour–
swatting horde of blood gorged black mosquitoes