couple in the pub
they both strip off
the beer labels
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Rafał Zabratyński
Rafał Zabratyński lives in Rzeszów, Poland. He has been writing haiku and other short Japanese poetic forms since 2000. His works have been published in numerous journals and awarded in a few competitions. He also enjoys reading and watching science fiction, exploring cosmology, mountain trekking, cycling, travelling.
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Great! I see this so often, that it’s nice to have it captured in a haiku. Thank you!
Great! I see this so often, that it’s nice to have it captured in a haiku. Thank you!
_I’ve seen that Rafal!
_ A Kuku Ku response.
four “Lites”
green light, yellow light, red.
blue light… ooops_!
“Mommy and Daddy
how did you two meet again?”
“Well kids it’s like this….”
spice cologne
a buzzed barfly drones
on and on
your senryu hits home. we need all the haiku
and senryu we can get on bar and booze
cultchur! dedicate em all to chuck bukowski!
Good observation, Rafal.
old married couple
they snap their fortune cookies
at the same moment
Rafal,
Great haiku. Isn’t peeling a beer label supposed to be an indication of a certain kind of frustration? :)
Perfect.
Collin
Dear Haiku Friends,
Thank you for all your generous comments on my first haiku here.
I’m glad it rings a bell with you.
Regards,
RaV
couple in the park
against the aged maple–
initials coupled