Hi Tanya, Your poem says a lot in a quiet way! There is deep silence embedded in it. Great work! -kala Reply
Simple, elegant, mysterious, my kind of haiku, thank you! falling down onto rush hour traffic seagull feathers Alan Summers Reply
Beautiful. I had to stop and read the poem slowly. The first read “a visit” through me off. Anyway, I love the image. Reply
Tanya, _A fine presentation! _A play of eight words… allowing the reader to describe the character. _M Reply
Wow! I love it! Thank you for this wonderful image! It has been 25 below here near the Canadian boarder, and I feed our strong, yet all to fragile, feathered friends! Your sentiments are so dear! Reply
tanya, feathers are never what i find on my sill, balcony, nor patio; and yet visitors have left subtle reminders. – crap!!! where seeds, nuts, and suet earlier were Reply
Yes,veeneth, this blissful smile is very familiar…I have a cat and I can see him very often smiling in his afternoon nap:) Reply
Hi Tanya,
Your poem says a lot in a quiet way!
There is deep silence embedded in it.
Great work!
-kala
Nicely done. :)
nice ku, Tanya
in the unfinished house
a scattering
of red feathers
Simple, elegant, mysterious, my kind of haiku, thank you!
falling down
onto rush hour traffic
seagull feathers
Alan Summers
Beautiful.
I had to stop and read the poem slowly. The first read “a visit” through me off. Anyway, I love the image.
Tanya,
_A fine presentation!
_A play of eight words… allowing the reader to describe the character.
_M
Wow! I love it! Thank you for this
wonderful image! It has been 25 below here
near the Canadian boarder, and I feed our
strong, yet all to fragile, feathered friends! Your sentiments are so dear!
Thank you all for your friendly and warm wellcome.
I love It!
Pure Art.
No more words needed.
tanya, feathers are never what i find on my sill, balcony, nor patio; and yet visitors
have left subtle reminders.
–
crap!!!
where seeds, nuts, and suet
earlier were
a smile
a cat napping
the lazy afternoon napping
Yes,veeneth, this blissful smile is very familiar…I have a cat and I can see him very often smiling in his afternoon nap:)