red window candles this house has eyes
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Michael Paone
At 22, Michael is a young haijin who currently resides just outside of Boston, MA. A self-proclaimed urbanist, he dances quitely on the line between nature and structure. The resulting haiku keeps him somewhat sane. Contact: mpaone12 at comcast dot net View all posts by Michael Paone
Oooo, very nice! Thanks.
that so vivid!
i like your one-line-haiku!
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sorry for the typo!
i meant
that`s so vivid!
i like your one-line-haiku!
I love this one.
michael, i can appreciate your “about the author”; specially with it being said, “there’s a thin line…”
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‘gainst a black sky white ibis draws the line
I ditto Angelika’s vivid.
Hi Michael,
Creativity, they say, is taking a fresh clean look at old knowledge-
And you’ve done it!
Great going!
-kala
Enjoyed this…color and warmth,
and a delightful image!
you made it!
you’re a star!
my very own cripple :)
Very spooky, nice flow to the line. Would work well in a live reading or performance as well.
nightfall
retracing my steps
down shady lane
–
window candles
this house has–
eyes