a patch of blue on the scarecrow’s shadow… first crocus Published by Ed Markowski Ed Markowski writes and paints in America's Great Lakes Region. View all posts by Ed Markowski
Lovely, Ed! And because my eyes first went skyward with line 1, it felt like a sudden fall… great moment! :-) Lary Reply
Hi Ed, It’s amazing how shadows find their place in haiku poems!! Your poem is one more classic example of that!! – kala Reply
Beautiful…
I second that, good juxtaposition.
a crocus bud
in the warmth of a hand
opens up
grey dawn…
a lingering rivermist
softens the crocus
Lovely, Ed!
And because my eyes first went skyward
with line 1, it felt like a sudden fall…
great moment!
:-)
Lary
Hi Ed,
It’s amazing how shadows find their place in haiku poems!!
Your poem is one more classic example of that!!
– kala
waning moon
this d.s.t. morn
already, i’m late
news of a neighbor’s
passing–
not knowing what
time it is