dry shadow
under the parked white car —
spring downpour
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Jeffrey Winke
Jeffrey Winke lives in Milwaukee, Wisconsin in a suburban condo mere blocks from Lake Michigan. He writes haiku, haibun, and articles about heavy equipment moving dirt.
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jeffrey
there are oddities in my life; one, reading the newspaper from the last page to the front page.
i’m saying this to make mention of the fact, i read your work in different line orders.
fantastic difference in perspective…
–
you’ve outdone yourself with “dry shadow”;
deep thoughts
–
her closet,
empty
after all these years–
sleeping on my side
of the bed
Somehow I imagined a cat being underneath!
jeffrey
there are oddities in my life; one, reading the newspaper from the last page to the front page.
i’m saying this to make mention of the fact, i read your work in different line orders.
fantastic difference in perspective…
–
you’ve outdone yourself with “dry shadow”;
deep thoughts
–
her closet,
empty
after all these years–
sleeping on my side
of the bed
‘dry shadow’ – an amazing observation. I will remember this long after reading it.