resetting the mousetrap, after she goes out to play Published by Anthony Slauson I'm from Jewells Run, Kentucky. I've been writing poetry for about fifteen years. View all posts by Anthony Slauson
We’re going to try to use the humane trap again, but she’s tricky and cheeky! Nice haiku, an interesting variation on the usual 3 line format. Reply
_Anthony, your words spark imagination. Snap! _The bail hammered down as she secretly tripped the trap with a twig; the mouse won the cheese. tnx_M Reply
Wonderful haiku and effective formating. crawling over arm hairs the gray-striped spider I try to take outside gK © 2007 Reply
We’re going to try to use the humane trap again, but she’s tricky and cheeky!
Nice haiku, an interesting variation on the usual 3 line format.
_Anthony, your words spark imagination.
Snap!
_The bail hammered down as she secretly tripped the trap with a twig; the mouse won the cheese.
tnx_M
Wonderful haiku and effective formating.
crawling over arm hairs
the gray-striped spider
I try to take outside
gK © 2007
milker, falling from a teet, this kitten
Great Haiku. Congratulations on being featured on tinywords.
Nice work Anthony. Clever mouse, clever you.
Clever mouse, planned the excape. Congratulations on being posted. Rhoda