darkening clouds– on the roller coaster rail a dove Published by Robbie Gamble Robbie Gamble: marrob2 at comcast dot net View all posts by Robbie Gamble
I like very much your technique of narrowing focus for showing the dove as a basic element of your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Reply
Wow. Wonderful. I just kept reading it and feeling it…thanks.
I like it.
I like very much your technique of narrowing focus for showing the dove as a basic element of your poem.
Thank you for sharing it.
Simple, beautiful and mysterious picture, I can see this dove immediately. Thank You.
I like the tension in it.
darkening cloud…
from the chimney sweep
black bats take flight