front porch dusk he whittles the silence Published by Darrell Lindsey Darrell Lindsey: writerd at hotmail dot com View all posts by Darrell Lindsey
Too “poetic” for haiku? No. You have found the poetry in the moment and articulated it in the best words in the best order. Aren’t all of us who try to write poetry, especially haiku, whittling the silence? Beautiful. Reply
Too “poetic” for haiku? No. You have found the poetry in the moment and articulated it in the best words in the best order. Aren’t all of us who try to write poetry, especially haiku, whittling the silence? Beautiful.
brittle opaque shell
left behind–
cicadas dirge
Very lovely, with more nuance than readers seem to have noticed. Thanks
great Haiku as always… well done.