ann, while reading your ku, i began thinking of the innumerable nights i’d fallen asleep with the sound of crickets in the background; only to awaken with the silence, my silent alarm system.
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crisp night air
through an open window…
cricket’s chirps go missing
A good modern take on cricket haiku.
Long live crickets! ;-)
I like the auditory image…the depth of localization…very concise.
Coincise and effective ku: I like it…
technology and nature!
i like your haiku!
Simple and effective.
ann, while reading your ku, i began thinking of the innumerable nights i’d fallen asleep with the sound of crickets in the background; only to awaken with the silence, my silent alarm system.
–
crisp night air
through an open window…
cricket’s chirps go missing