mannequin faces
a cosmetic counter woman
offers a spritz
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Jeffrey Winke
Jeffrey Winke lives in Milwaukee, Wisconsin in a suburban condo mere blocks from Lake Michigan. He writes haiku, haibun, and articles about heavy equipment moving dirt.
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Jeffery;
Once, I read your words -leaving their smudge on the window of time- and since, I’ve looked forward to further oppertunities… . Here, with my gaping smile, there is no disappointment. tnx _M
I really enjoyed the subtle humor in this one
mannequin/cosmetic/spritz
fabulous word choice for a fresh senryu jeffrey
Great to see a fellow Milwaukee-ite! :-) I love the word choice on this one. Wonderful senryu, Jeffrey!
~Megan
perfume counter
he looks for a scent
to match her dress
A sharp senryu, reminds me of running the gauntlet at Macy’s.
Jeffery;
Once, I read your words -leaving their smudge on the window of time- and since, I’ve looked forward to further oppertunities… . Here, with my gaping smile, there is no disappointment. tnx _M
spring,
now first frost
a covering of purple
petunias