between stars and lightning bugs, a quiet conversation Published by Anthony Slauson I'm from Jewells Run, Kentucky. I've been writing poetry for about fifteen years. View all posts by Anthony Slauson
between stars and lightning bugs, a quiet conversation I just love the biggness, smallness, and then quietness of this as a conclusion. Reply
I like especially the presence of 2 people amidst a contrast of lights from the macrocosmos (stars) and lights from the microcosmos (from bugs). Reply
occasional firefly amidst words in the dark occasional kiss – flash of lightning springs forth– silence Reply
Anthony… I visually -listened- to the conversation… between the lightning bugs and the stars. Grand_! the last firefly hides amoung the rain drops a bat misses _M Reply
between stars
and lightning bugs,
a quiet conversation
I just love the biggness, smallness, and then quietness of this as a conclusion.
a very nice ku…
I like especially the presence of 2 people amidst
a contrast of lights from the macrocosmos (stars)
and lights from the microcosmos (from bugs).
occasional firefly
amidst words in the dark
occasional kiss
–
flash of lightning springs forth–
silence
Anthony – This haiku is truly perfect… just flawlessly beautiful. Bravo!
Stunning! My idea of what a haiku should be. Thanks Anthony!
Anthony… I visually -listened- to the conversation… between the lightning bugs and the stars. Grand_!
the last firefly
hides amoung the rain drops
a bat misses
_M