spring breeze —
three little girls run
into the sky
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Narayanan Raghunathan
Poet, philosopher, and founder of Wonder Haiku Worlds.
I was active on various websites related to poetry & haiku. I wrote as Rudra & brahman~narayanan in Photo Haiku Gallery & as Rudra in midnightedition!
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spring breeze —
three little girls run
into the sky
Dear Narayanan
This is delightful. You capture all the innocence and wonder of childhood in these few words.
It was great to meet you last month; a pity only that we didn’t find more time to talk!
spring breeze —
three little girls run
into the sky
Dear Narayanan
This is delightful. You capture all the innocence and wonder of childhood in these few words.
It was great to meet you last month; a pity only that we didn’t find more time to talk!
Till next time…
Norman
Very sweet image, Narayanan. It made me smile. Thank you!
_Friend Narayanan; So much said… such simple words; the crux of haiku. As always, _m
Thank you Norman ~ Surely it was a pity we could not conjure time to converse more ! Thank you Melissa and Magyar.
Beautifully unadorned, simply gorgeous.
hum of bees
a few skinned knees
fresh pink peonies
spring breeze —
three little girls run
into the sky /nr
only to fall again,
these cherry petals /jw
This is simply lovely;
thankyou
B
Narayanan, I love the warmth
and innocence here…very nice!
;)
Lary
Narayanan, I like the simplicity of your haiku and very nice imagery.
winter now silent
perched in a tree…
this black bird, this dove, a sparrow
Thank you Alan, Penelope, josh, Barbara, Laryalee, Marijo & Bob
spring breeze —
three little girls run
into the sky /nr
only to fall again,
these cherry petals /jw
new dreams melt
from the blossoms ~
a blue butterfly /nr
Quite a realistic pix. Knowing you, the question, was it Shiva watching it (did he have girls, sisters to Ganesh and Muruga?
Wonderful to re-read.
Alan
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