spring cleaning the last mound of snow trickles down the driveway Published by Ed Markowski Ed Markowski writes and paints in America's Great Lakes Region. View all posts by Ed Markowski
Wonderful image, Ed! I agree with Bill about “trickles” – perfect word choice. I like the implied time lapse with the “mound of snow” trickling. spring cleaning the slow gutter murmur of yesterday’s rain Reply
spring cleaning the last mound of snow trickles down the driveway a sleepy murmur from her carseat Reply
Nice one, Ed…and how well I know that feeling of watching the last mound of snow trickle away. ;) Lary Reply
Were you looking up my driveway when you wrote this? It’s so “right on”. Spring in Northern Wisconsin. Reply
Ed, I really enjoyed your Spring images! I agree with Kat, but from St. Paul, MN. The green park statue Posing on brown Springtime grass Speaks to snow patches Reply
Very good, Ed. “trickles” is an excellent choice and beautifully placed.
weathered siding
snow leaves the barn
one drip at a time
Wonderful image, Ed! I agree with Bill about “trickles” – perfect word choice. I like the implied time lapse with the “mound of snow” trickling.
spring cleaning
the slow gutter murmur
of yesterday’s rain
spring cleaning
the last mound of snow trickles
down the driveway
a sleepy murmur
from her carseat
spring warmth
seeping, slowly in the bone
flowers waking
yeah! i like this haiku (especially “trickles”)
Very nice, Ed. Very well done.
HER SMILE;
A BRIGHT GREEN GRASS
AROUND THIS GLISTENING
IN THE SUNSHINE
SNOW DRIFT RESTING
Nice one, Ed…and how well I know that feeling of watching the last mound of snow trickle away.
;)
Lary
Were you looking up my driveway when you wrote this? It’s so “right on”. Spring in Northern Wisconsin.
Very well done dear Ed!
tickling dust mop
naked
spring cleaning
Ed, I really enjoyed your Spring images! I agree with Kat, but from St. Paul, MN.
The green park statue
Posing on brown Springtime grass
Speaks to snow patches
crud cleansing from
nature’s winter face
river overflowing banks
spring cleaning ~
watching butterflies
cross the wall