prairie sunset the glow of the cattleman’s branding iron Published by Ed Markowski Ed Markowski writes and paints in America's Great Lakes Region. View all posts by Ed Markowski
prairie sunset the glow of the cattleman’s branding iron still warm the coffee now bitter cold descends stoking the fire beans and bacon morning comes too soon…. Reply
Ed, You’ve teased all my senses… either directly or subliminally! sunset blankets this lowing herd campfires mime _m Reply
bar-b-que
chuckwagon steak
sundown smoke
prairie sunset
the glow of the cattleman’s
branding iron
still warm
the coffee now bitter
cold descends
stoking the fire
beans and bacon
morning comes
too soon….
this is a perfect haiku in my opinion.
cinematic & perfectly juxtaposed
T
Ditto cinematic – but nonetheless ‘real’. Great stuff.
Ditto cinematic and good, like the movie western versions of movies like the 7 samurai.
Cinematic, dramatic, but not in the least overstated. A Markowski gem.
Not bad
this haiku,
but I have seen better.
smoke from the fire
snaking cross the glades–
this glowing sunset
Ed, You’ve teased all my senses… either directly or subliminally!
sunset
blankets this lowing herd
campfires mime
_m
Nice haiku. Sunset is time rich indeed of great views to write about.