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  1. I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet… it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening.
    Well done.

  2. Gabi Greve takes the prize. Well done – an excellent use of kigo!

    next morning
    the snow was over
    everything

    ^_^

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