cherry
blossoms
drifting
down
mission
street
three
pink
hookers
Ed beautiful and simply stated
It is not often I come across a "cherry blossom" poem that is so unique and delightful. Good job, Ed!
Ed, great job, esp with the step look here. The color of cherry blossoms so over used, combined with the implied "church mssion" 3 pink hookers-leave a last image that really caught my attention. Michael Lee Johnson, Poet, Itasca IL.
sultry evening
liquid from the take out bag
runs near the victim
World Haiku Review Vol 2: Issue 3 November 2002
WHCvanguard – Hard or "Real" Haiku
Selected by Susumu Takiguchi
Love it. Reminds me of the week I stayed in the Mission twelve years ago — good times.
Ppl like you get all the brisna. I just get to say thanks for he answer.