half the sky
a deeper blue
mid-life birthday

11 Responses

  1. Matthew M. Cariello Says:

    fiftieth birthday
    a half moon
    shines on my bed

  2. Marie Shimane Says:

    in a tea room
    overlooking winter's lake
    69 tomorrow

    posted on World Haiku Review, January 2011

  3. @andreochka Says:

    Interesting work, Susan… really enjoyed it.

  4. Penny Harter Says:

    lovely haiku, Susan!

  5. Susan Constable Says:

    Thankyou, Marie . . . and Happy Birthday!

    I like that one, Matthew. Thanks for sharing it.

    Appreciate the compliment, Penny. Thanks!

    I'm glad you think so, Andre.


  6. Alison H. Says:

    I love that deep blue. Wonderful haiku!

  7. Alan Summers Says:

    Those first two lines compliment the theme image. :-)


  8. Susan Constable Says:

    Thanks, Alison and Alan. I appreciate hearing from you both.


  9. shaheen Says:

    fifty now
    still plan to write
    first love poem

  10. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Very beautiful.

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