on his bedside table
a thin film of dust
Issue 11.3 | 12 January 2012
Very delicate, Pat.
Thank you Norman, so much appreciated to hear from you.
So very poignant.
Very poignant using effective juxtaposition. Love that last line in all its sadness. If you'd said "a fine film of dust" or "a layer of fine dust" etc… it wouldn't have had the same effect.
Very moving, and disturbing, as any good poem should be.
Alan, With Words
Whether death or divorce, it's very moving.
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