barely
longer than a cardinal?s call . . .
winter haiku

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Issue 13.1 | 18 March 2013

17 Responses

  1. Matt Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 10:39 am

    Very nice, Margaret!

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 10:52 am

    Lovely, Margaret!

    Made me :)

    marion

  3. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 3:55 pm

    Thank you so much, Marion.

  4. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 11:23 am

    Good work, haunting, smart.

  5. Marjorie Buettner Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:24 pm

    I love this!

  6. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 3:54 pm

    Thank you, Marjorie.

  7. Michael Lee Johnson Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:49 pm

    Margaret Dornaus – the reverse affect of this mini poem is very clever and lovely. I invite you to submit work to Michael Lee Johnson at promomanusa@gmail.com. I run 7 poetry sites which you can find on line.

  8. Alison Hedlund Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 3:01 pm

    We have our songs, too…very nice.

  9. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 18th, 2013 at 3:55 pm

    Thanks to all for the kind remarks . . .

  10. gillena cox Says:
    March 21st, 2013 at 3:52 am

    surprise ending very nice

  11. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 21st, 2013 at 6:03 am

    Thank you, Gillena.

  12. Dawn Apanius Says:
    March 21st, 2013 at 4:33 am

    Beautiful, Margaret!

  13. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 21st, 2013 at 9:56 pm

    Thank you, Dawn . . . You are too sweet, too!

  14. @DreamsOfTaos Says:
    March 22nd, 2013 at 4:48 am

    Very nice, Margaret — SMA

  15. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    March 22nd, 2013 at 10:49 am

    Thank you so much, Scott!

  16. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:
    March 29th, 2013 at 8:05 am

    So beautiful and new. Just lovely.

  17. Margaret Dornaus Says:
    April 2nd, 2013 at 8:45 pm

    Thank you, Ellen!

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