deep autumn all the tree tops full of sky Published by Ann K. Schwader Ann K. Schwader's haiku have appeared in Modern Haiku, Frogpond, The Heron's Nest, bottle rockets, and elsewhere. View all posts by Ann K. Schwader
So beautiful, Ann. And I love the contrasts of deep and high, bare and full . . . Have put it in 'my favourites' collection. blue the sky falls to pieces in a gum tree (H.Commended, Kokako Competition 2011) Reply
deep autumn all the tree tops full of sky Lovely and atmospheric poem, I love it. warm regards, Alan Reply
How lovely! I will look up today.
Nice visual.
Absolutely lovely, Ann!
Oh yes, as others have already said —lovely!
gorgeous
So beautiful, Ann. And I love the contrasts of deep and high, bare and full . . . Have put it in 'my favourites' collection.
blue
the sky falls to pieces
in a gum tree
(H.Commended, Kokako Competition 2011)
deep autumn
all the tree tops
full of sky
Lovely and atmospheric poem, I love it.
warm regards,
Alan
It really is a profound poem. I like to think and choose your words.