we make out of all this friction love (originally appeared in Modern Haiku, 42:3, autumn 2011) Published by Peter Yovu Peter Yovu lives near Montpelier, Vermont. View all posts by Peter Yovu
we make out of all this friction love ?Peter Yovu This says it all!! wonderful play! :-) hot and tender heart body and soul the play’s the thing Thank you, Peter, for the joy in your eight words that I want to read again and again. Frances Reply
Indeed we do, whatever our definitions of friction or love. This is one of those haiku that makes us realize, well, just about everything that matters. Reply
. . cherry mist the gun you pointed as I said I love you Alan Summers Publications credits: Symmetry Pebbles (2011); Does Fish-God Know (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2012) . . Wonderful haiku: we make out of all this friction love —Peter Yovu And out of all the friction of relationships and alternate universes, love helps, and it's okay. warm regards, Alan Reply
we make out
of all this friction
love
?Peter Yovu
This says it all!!
wonderful play! :-)
hot and tender
heart body and soul
the play’s the thing
Thank you, Peter, for the joy in your eight words that I want to read again and again.
Frances
Indeed we do, whatever our definitions of friction or love. This is one of those haiku that makes us realize, well, just about everything that matters.
after sex
he googles
himself
(Kohinoor, Autumn '09)
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cherry mist
the gun you pointed
as I said I love you
Alan Summers
Publications credits:
Symmetry Pebbles (2011); Does Fish-God Know (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2012)
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Wonderful haiku:
we make out
of all this friction
love
—Peter Yovu
And out of all the friction of relationships and alternate universes, love helps, and it's okay.
warm regards,
Alan
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Brilliant haiku!
marion