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I love this. Sexy!
Leaves me speechless!
the candle flickers—
soft piano plays
outside
So creative. Unique style…and so understood yet open to pondering. Exciting to see the venture out of norms.
An elegant and evocative concrete poem!
Dave,
Love your creative haiku!
OUTDOOR DRAMA
Bali beach
full moon on
full moon
Clever concrete ku, Dave! :)
marion
Nicely done
her red kimono
slipping off her shoulder . . .
she lets it
Bill Kenney
Very nice. I must say though, it mirrors the style of E. E. Cummings greatly! The way it is written and worded… If I didn’t know better I might’ve thought it WAS one of his! Lol
Very well done!
Great piece!
Thanks everyone. I appreciate all of your kind comments.
Wonderful Dave! As aesthetically beautiful as it is poetically. And I'm so glad the Tinywords html code formatting was able to preserve all the nuance as well as the visual charm of this one.
Strider
oh yeah, poetry's supposed to be fun
Wonderful; I can see her shape as well as the dress.
Great concrete haiku… well done!
Visual wizardry. And a concrete poem.