I am reminded of a similar line, which Blanche Dubois delivers in 'Streetcar': 'I rely on the kindness of strangers.' Your haiku seems to play off of that nicely.
I also thought of one of my own (naturally!):
veteran nurse
I feel her warmth
in the cold thermometer
A time of despair
When so very young.
Now aged peace.
Nice sentiment
I am reminded of a similar line, which Blanche Dubois delivers in 'Streetcar': 'I rely on the kindness of strangers.' Your haiku seems to play off of that nicely.
I also thought of one of my own (naturally!):
veteran nurse
I feel her warmth
in the cold thermometer
burnt out sticks
briefly lit, then cold, cold.
the match stick girl
Morning clouds flushed with pink
An eruption of white cockatoos
Wheeling, squawking.
The river wakes up….
night falls
cat eyes illumine the page
curling up
the bedroom
several shades brighter
snow dawn
(The Mainichi Daily News, 19th January, 2012)
tree ice
sunlight
inches
down
the
bedroom
chair
(Tinywords, February 4, 2004)
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I like how this is small and simple, just like a kind gesture from a stranger might be! Very nice.
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