old vagrant his ring of sparrows


10 Responses

  1. hammerandtongs Says:

    Mysterious. Sparrows have adapted to human habitations. Is the vagrant like them in adapting, or have the arrows adapted to him?

  2. Alan Summers Says:


    Sometimes these six word haiku pack an emotional weight. Wonderful wonderful wonderful.


  3. snakypoet Says:

    Oh, that is SO nice!

  4. janewilliams Says:

    The difference between looking and seeing, beautifully depicted.

    homeless her shopping trolley overflows

  5. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Love it!

  6. Mary Jo Balistreri Says:

    Marvelous visual picture plus I can hear the sparrows sweet chirping. Really like this haiku.

  7. janbentexas Says:

    Interesting visual.
    Quite exact.
    Liked reading this, at least 5 times.

    Jan Benson

  8. sanjuktaa Says:

    Lovely ku! So well-crafted!

  9. Darcy Smith Says:

    Powerful. Just brilliant.

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