the touch before we part mimosa leaf
—Sreelatha Nair
Issue 16.2 | 2 December 2016
Nice!
a whispered promise to meet again summer breeze
Jane, yours a fine complement to Sreelatha's nifty one-liner. _m
Rhythmic too!
__ Grand emotional vibrations here Shreelatha, thoughts that can be envisioned in many ways: soul to soul; soul to nature; nature to nature; the seen to the subliminal. _m
So much left unsaid. Beautiful!
This is beautiful, and it makes me think of its mirror image(ish): the part before we touch mimosa leaf
I like that flip as well!
Sweet poem with touch me not-mimosa leaf Latha !
What a lovely one-line, Sreelatha. Like Geethanjali has said, there's so much unsaid here … each word lending itself to fthe flow.
a beauty of a one-liner!
the touch before we part snowflakes!!
Like Geethanjali has said, there's so much unsaid here … each word lending itself to fthe flow.
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December 2nd, 2016 at 1:30 pm
Nice!
December 2nd, 2016 at 2:33 pm
a whispered promise to meet again summer breeze
December 2nd, 2016 at 6:01 pm
Jane, yours a fine complement to Sreelatha's nifty one-liner. _m
December 2nd, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Rhythmic too!
December 2nd, 2016 at 6:26 pm
__ Grand emotional vibrations here Shreelatha, thoughts that can be envisioned in many ways: soul to soul; soul to nature; nature to nature; the seen to the subliminal. _m
December 2nd, 2016 at 8:19 pm
So much left unsaid. Beautiful!
December 3rd, 2016 at 1:38 am
This is beautiful, and it makes me think of its mirror image(ish):
the part before we touch mimosa leaf
December 5th, 2016 at 8:42 am
I like that flip as well!
December 3rd, 2016 at 5:53 am
Sweet poem with touch me not-mimosa leaf Latha !
December 3rd, 2016 at 3:01 pm
What a lovely one-line, Sreelatha.
Like Geethanjali has said, there's so much unsaid here … each word lending itself to fthe flow.
December 5th, 2016 at 9:30 pm
a beauty of a one-liner!
December 18th, 2016 at 7:13 am
the touch before we part snowflakes!!
April 17th, 2017 at 2:23 am
Like Geethanjali has said, there's so much unsaid here … each word lending itself to fthe flow.