night pond –
the Big Dipper full
of leaves
(originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)
Published by
Zuzanna Truchlewska
Zuzanna Truchlewska is a teacher and tutor, fan of mountains, music, poetry and photography. She lives in ?aziska G?rne in Poland. Her haiku have appeared in The Asahi Shimbun (Asahi Haikuist Network), Cattails, KUZU, The Mainichi Japan, Wild Plum, and the WHA Haiga Contest.
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Sweet and poignant. Perfect in its way.
__ Within the Spring moonlight, we see the new green leaves dancing in that star-form; such a grand life attraction, Zuzanna!
My echo to complement, in the Autumn we may see and hear:
the Big Dipper
empties its fallen leaves
owls count
Smiles_! _m
Thank you. Beautiful to look at.
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night pond –
the Big Dipper full
of leaves
(originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)
—ZUZANNA TRUCHLEWSKA
Love the opening line, and the fantastic phrase:
the Big Dipper full
of leaves
Great!
Geart, I like it