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  1. .
    our small fire
    through a hole in the clouds
    the only star

    —RICK TARQUINIO

    Wonderful, and magical, seeing a space in the clouds where a star is shining through, even perhaps opened up by the camp fire and smoke. :-)

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    the camp fire burns the misty moon halved by thin cloud

    [monoku]

    Alan Summers
    "Stepping Stones:  a way into haiku" ed. Martin Lucas
    ISBN 978-0-9522397-9-6 (British Haiku Society 2007)
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