picking wildflowers
she always takes things
literally
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Edward Huddleston
Edward Cody Huddleston lives in Georgia. His haiku have appeared in several journals including Lynx, Modern Haiku, Frogpond and Heron's Nest.
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Ooooh, we'd be arrested in the UK for that!
An interesting dynamic and tension depending on the reading.
e.g.
picking wildflowers
(enjambment or pause)
she always takes things
literally
And
picking wildflowers she always takes things literally
I love how the reader is quite literally being played with, too!
Ooooh, we'd be arrested in the UK for that!
An interesting dynamic and tension depending on the reading.
e.g.
picking wildflowers
(enjambment or pause)
she always takes things
literally
And
picking wildflowers she always takes things literally
I love how the reader is quite literally being played with, too!
Great one!
Alan
wisteria
often dresses this statue's pose
searching vine
__Thanks, Edward… we often look beyond our -natures gifts-… even as they enhance our human gifts. _m