picking wildflowers
she always takes things
literally

2 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Ooooh, we'd be arrested in the UK for that!

    An interesting dynamic and tension depending on the reading.

    e.g.

    picking wildflowers
    (enjambment or pause)

    she always takes things
    literally

    And

    picking wildflowers she always takes things literally

    I love how the reader is quite literally being played with, too!

    Great one!

    Alan

  2. Magyar Says:

    wisteria
    often dresses this statue's pose
    searching vine

    __Thanks, Edward… we often look beyond our -natures gifts-… even as they enhance our human gifts. _m

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