This is such a lovely haiku. I particularly like the verb “ringed”. I imagine birdsong echoing and reverberating like bells all around the hiker but also, in unison with the hiker’s own steps. The theme of being one with nature is very strong. I love the musicality of this delightful concert in the forest.
May 12th, 2022 at 11:44 am
mountains height
climbing toward that vertex
birds toll my steps
__Grand, Kala! As we watch nature, we are then… watched.
May 12th, 2022 at 12:29 pm
Magyar,
Thank you so much.
Nice haiku you have penned.
May 13th, 2022 at 10:11 am
This is such a lovely haiku. I particularly like the verb “ringed”. I imagine birdsong echoing and reverberating like bells all around the hiker but also, in unison with the hiker’s own steps. The theme of being one with nature is very strong. I love the musicality of this delightful concert in the forest.
May 14th, 2022 at 10:41 am
Marcie,
Thank you so much.
What beautiful feedback.
May 14th, 2022 at 1:14 am
Simple and best!
May 14th, 2022 at 10:41 am
Oh! Muskaan.
Thank you so much.
May 21st, 2022 at 10:03 am
….as always!