mountain trek
my steps ringed
with birdsong




(Wales Haiku Journal, Autumn 2021)


7 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    mountains height
    climbing toward that vertex
    birds toll my steps

    __Grand, Kala! As we watch nature, we are then… watched.

  2. kalaramesh Says:

    Thank you so much.

    Nice haiku you have penned.

  3. Marcie Says:

    This is such a lovely haiku. I particularly like the verb “ringed”. I imagine birdsong echoing and reverberating like bells all around the hiker but also, in unison with the hiker’s own steps. The theme of being one with nature is very strong. I love the musicality of this delightful concert in the forest.

  4. kalaramesh Says:

    Thank you so much.
    What beautiful feedback.

  5. Muskaan Ahuja Says:

    Simple and best!

  6. kalaramesh Says:

    Oh! Muskaan.
    Thank you so much.

  7. martin1223 Says:

    ….as always!

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